Navaak's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[WATER GHOULS]

Strongly reminds me of Templesmith's style. I love it!

[Syrupleaf: Page.10 END]

Good Comic

Thank you for uploading the complete comic! It was great reading this. A few points:

1. You should work a little bit on the lettering... at some points it was a bit off. If you don't want to have someone do it for you (I wouldn't either), you can find certain free comic fonts on the internet that look great! Changing this can greatly improve the aesthetic effect.

2. I am neither a comic artist nor a painter, but I think some of the expressions also need some work, eg. the face of the giant that had his head cut off. It doesn't much affect the overall feel, but would also improve the dramatic effect of some panels.

Overall, I think you did a good job! Keep it coming, I would love to see more...

[Follow the white rabbit Alice]

Excellent

The "wrong angle" is VERY apropriate for this drawing, especially since it depicts content related to Alice in Wonderland (which is generally "wrong". Good work on this one.

Citrina responds:

Alice was never my thing, but suddenly I felt like it...

[GoH: Zombie]

Great PIcture!

...it reminds me of the song "Zombie Prostitute" by Voltaire... amazing!

I also find the rhymes you include with each picture to be a very pleasant "wrapping".... they improve the taste vastly ;)

[Red Hot]

Great Work

Great art, as with your other works. Your style is simple yet detailed, not only concerning the subject but the background as well.

Bt why can't I vote on this one?

KimiCookie responds:

Thankyou for your comment. I am not sure why you can't vote. I'll look into it though.